We got a lot of feedback from this animation. This one we were not really happy with at all. The tutors let us know that the narrative still seemed a bit loose, which we also thought. Alot of the feedback they said we completely agreed with, but we found it hard to take loads of feedback and still create a piece that was original to us.
We had to include more shots of the growth
Reduce the number of shots
Change the camera at the end to have the movement of the camera to effect the shot prior to the one it is on already
To give more of a peaceful feel to it
To take out the stills
To match up the mountain shots so the flowed better together
We had a few things on top of this that we wanted to do as a team, so it was a busy time on the couple weeks between this and out most recent piece.